Wednesday, 29 March 2017

Blue

Blue 
I am blue cheese.

I am a blue Ferrari.

I am a Norwegian blue T-shirt.

I taste like a crunchy blue M&M.

I look like a blue rose blooming.

5 comments:

  1. I like how you said "I am a crunchy blue m&m instead of just saying I am a blue m&m

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  2. Edward - I loved how you used the word "Blooming" as it gave me a clear picture of the rose your were describing. (Kiri)

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  3. I love how you said Norwegian blue t-shirt not just a blue T-shirt and you had done a very well job good writing edward

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  4. I love the discribtion you used and how you used it in your sentences,
    I liked how you explained that you were a blue item because that gave me a Clear picture in my head. It was really nice for me to know that you connected your writing with yourself.
    I loved your writing it was amazing from
    Ella.f

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  5. I liked when you is I look like a blue m&m. I think you could improve on when you is I look like a blue rose blooming. although I think it was brought from Joshua

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